Megan

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Saturday evening Megan and her grandmother and her grandfather  Lee and Tally  were taking Megan out for a walk to Cornwall Park. First Megan and Grandpa Tally and Grandma Lee  and Megan had a little sweet picnic. In their picnic they had fruit ,egg ,sandwiches, mints , cheese pies ,coke ,water , chicken and chips. They had a big big munch  . Megan  saw all of her friends at the park ,  she saw Reagan, Annabell ,Tressa ,Ally ,Morgan,  Jane  and Kaylah .

They play all together,  First they  asked all their mums and dads if they could all go out together.They all agreed with yes so they went out . Megan asked could we go to the shop ,movies, Kmart and Mcdonalds or something. Now since   we’re  getting  older    let's sneak and travel to Auckland  and go to Rainbows end .”Let's go on  the  roller coaster, it's cool amazing on the roller coaster”  said Megan..  So they had a long travel  to Auckland .  First they went to the zoo. They saw lots of native animals.  They  saw birds, monkeys,flamingos, and crocodiles.  Then they went  traveling back  to their home called Palmerston North.  The  girls were really lucky .  Then  the girls had to go home, they were  like ohh moaning , out loud .Megan went back to her mum and dads. Mum’s name is Jessie-Len. Dad's name is  Ben. ,”Mum and Dad what we having for dinner?” said Megan. ‘Chicken salad ‘ yelled mum .Oh’ ooh yum munch munch Megan went eating. Then after they had dinner they went to sleep but after they were going to get to sleep something strange happened,  a car crashed.They knew who it was but Mum only did.It was her friend from work. Her work was called Titacole Island  Camacol . Her friends name was  Allabeca, that was Megan's Mum’s best friend from work . Mum started crying deep inside her heart . Then they saw outside a car crash boom bam ding boom boom bang that loud noisy crash went harmfully.The next day they went to Mum’s friends furnell then next Megan just hung out with her Mum and Dad and had a happy day.