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WALT - use our senses and the 5 W’s when writing
I wonder where the bridge goes to. It might lead to the jungle or the wild magical forest. It smells very weird. “I can hear a quiet fuzzy bird” said Angel and Kylah.
Then “Aargh” screamed my brother Kharter and myself .
Dad said this looks 1055 years old while Aunty Kandice was photographing. Jackson and Jakobi got so scared that they were running around in circles . Mum just sat on the grass playing on her phone listening to songs . Ok I stopped screaming so has Angel . Once I stopped screaming I stopped and looked at something and then I saw a strawberry tree. I wanted to taste it so I did. It tasted pretty nice . I wonder who made this tree . When was this bridge made? - Was it made in 9098 6098 8902 whatever .
“Dad” I asked can we have lunch now”? I said.
“Yes” said Dad .
Mum and Dad looked at the really old bridge. Mum and Dad thought. Is there a sign? said Dad “Yeah you’re right” said Mum there should be a sign there ohh ohh yelled Aunty Jackie. “There it is” said mum and dad - read what it says ok. No one goes near or across this bridge or definitely it will break please listen to us. please please it is dangerous across this bridge please. Uncle Nickie crossed over it nearly but where like no no and Uncle Nickie said ok and didn’t cross the bridge . The bridge I said duh instead of on top of the bridge what about on the bottom said myself . There might be a troll underneath. There might be a monster underneath the bridge . There might a crocodile underneath the bridge. “Ahh “ screamed all the little kids .”Ahem ah ah ah ah ah ok ok ok okay yay” said Aunty Kandice and my mum Cassie. Can you older two stop scaring the kids please. ok ok ok me and Angel said . And the kids settled down . “Ahhh Errr ahhh ree I feel better now” said the kids now don’t scare me ok let’s head off home and have more fun Yay! . And they head off bye bye.
Scary bridge that was Beau. Had the tribe there and all well done.
ReplyDeleteFantastic story Beau you must show Papa he'll loves this story.
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